Sunday, January 17, 2010

Chapter 4 of Destiny By BeautyPattinson

Chapter 4- Meet Me Half Way

Bella’s POV

- Jake! I want to know where you are taking me! I’m curious now!!!
- Wait, Bells – Jake said laughing.
- I know you will like it – he said.
- Ok, but you know me, I’m curious!
- Ok, ok, close your eyes and just open when I say! – Jake said smiling.
- Ok… - Oh my God I will die like this! I felt Jake taking me away from the car, we walked a little bit, then I felt my feet in something… Soft. Sand?
- Open your eyes… - Jake whispered in my ear. I opened and was without words.

Jake’s favorite place:
http://www.orange-county-travel.com/beaches/San%20Clemente%20Beach%20at%20night.bmp

- J… Jake this is… Perfect…
- Yes, I like come here tonight to think a little… And I though this is a good place for you to go. This is the place where I asked you in marry, Bells – He smiled. How can I forget?! When I came here to bue my apartment and see Jake he asked me to come and…
- Oh, Jake! – I hugged him.
- You’re the best ever! – I said crying. He laughed.
- Stop crying, Bells, I bring you here to smile and you cry? No. Smile, my princess. – He said and I smiled. This beach was different than when I came here with Jake… I came here 1 year ago and Jake asked me in married…

Flashback of Bella and Jake in the beach 1 year ago

- Jake! What a beautiful place! Oh my God, love it! But, why did you bring me here? – I said surprised.
- Bella… I came here with you because… - He took a deep breathe.
- Bella… There’s a lot of time what we are together, 4 years, and I came to live in New York because of you… I love you more than everything and I do anything for you. I want to have you just for me for all of my days without limits. Isabella Marie Swan… Want you marry me? – He said and got a golden ring of e cute little blue box. I was without words…
- Jake… Of course I marry you! – I said and hugged him.
End of Flashback

- This is so beautiful, Jake, thanks! I love you so much!!!
- Love you too, girl! – He said laughing and kissed me fast in the lips. We sited down on the sand. Was night and nobody were in the beach, just me and Jake…
- Bella? – Jake said.
- Hm?
- We need to talk about one thing… - he started. I know what he want to talk about. I just can’t…
- No, Jake, please…
- Bella, what’s happen with you and Edward? – He asked. No. Anything but it, I can’t live that pain again… Not again…
- Jake, no…
- Bella. I’m dating you for 4 5 years. We will get married next month. I need to know what’s happen. – He was right. I had to tell him and end with this.
- Ok, Jake… So are you ready to know the worse moment in my life? – I said looking at my hands.
- Bella…
- Everything started with a girl…

Listen to the song of the chapter: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hTNbVhN0qiE

‘’I was happy, dating Edward; we were the best couple of the school… Everybody loved see us together. I was more than happy. With Edward nothing can hurt me. He was the one who understood me always, he was… Mine. With him I was complete. I remember the last present what he gave me of valentine’ day.
- Hey, Bells! – He said.
- Ed? What’s up? – I said smiling.
- Miss you – he said and kissed me.
- I have one thing for you.
- What? – I asked and he showed me a small silver heart pendant.
- This is my heart what I want to be with you always… - he said. I cried.
- Thanks, Ed! This is perfect! Thanks! – I kissed him and he kissed me back.
- I love you, Bella, and will always love. – He whispered.
- And I will always love you, Edward Cullen! – I said and we laughed. Everything was perfect… I was in the school having class and Edward was by my side writing something. Then he gave me a piece of paper. I read:
You+Me=Eternal Love xD
I laughed and wrote:
Me+You= Eternal Sweet Love *.*

And than I gave him. He laughed and sent kissed for me, I gave back. And than the teacher said:
- Guys, we have a new student. Her name is Victoria Lefevre. She will enter in the middle of the year so I want you guys helping her get the new contents. Miss. Lefevre? – And then a perfect girl, with long and perfect red hair, a pretty face and a spectacular body came’s. All the boys and I hope just not Edward, started to look at her like a children looking at a shine object.
- Miss. Lefevre, you can sit by Edward’s side, he will help you get the new and old contents. – The teacher said. I was jealous and really angry because that. Why Edward? When the class finished Victoria was talking to my boyfriend really happy, and I tried to ignore the conversation. I was getting my things when I eared she asking:
- Do you have a girlfriend? – Yes he has. But he didn’t say anything. I looked at him and he was looking at me too.
- Yes… - He said and she looked at me. But I didn’t look back; I exited of the class faster than I can.
- Bella! – He came behind me.
- Bella, love, what’s the problem? – He asked. I stopped.
- What’s the problem? What’s the problem, Edward? Why don’t you ask your little friend, Victoria? – I said and started walking again. He went with me.
- Bells, please, don’t be jealous. There’s nothing with me and Vickie. – I stopped. Vickie?
- Oh, Vickie? Interesting, she already has a nickname.
- Bella. Stop acting like a child. I can’t date some one what don’t trust me.
- Awesome. So search Vickie, maybe she trust you more than me. And why don’t you ask her to be your girlfriend? She isn’t better than me? Say Edward? She’s… - but I didn’t finish because his lips silent mines. I tried don’t kiss him back, but didn’t work. My hands went for his head and his hands for my waist. He kissed me for a long time and whispered:
- I don’t kiss her like I do with you – and then he hugged me stronger.
- I don’t hug her like with you… - and then he got my chin and pulled me to look at him.
- I don’t do anything of that, because you’re the only one. – he said. I hugged him.
- Sorry, Ed… I… Was jealous but. Who will not? She’s perfect…
- You are perfect. In the world, Bella doesn’t exist one woman what can be more beautiful than you for me. I just have eyes for you. – He said and we made up. Was when I was walking to my next class that I bumped with a boy.
- Oh, sorry, I must pay attention when walk… - I said.
- No, no problem, hey, you are… Isabella Swan, right? – he asked.
- Just Bella – I said, I don’t like the persons calling me Isabella. Prefer Bella.
- Oh, ok, I’m Alec Volutri. – He said. We started to talk and I knew he is a really nice guy.
- Hey do you… Have a boyfriend? – He asked. I blushed.
- Yes… - I said.
- And you? – I asked. He laughed.
- Not a boyfriend but a girlfriend yes, I’m dating Victoria. The new student.
- Wow, but… She came today and is already dating you?
- No, no, I know her for a long time; she was studying in the same school of me.
- Oh, ok – I said.
- Anm… I gotta go now, Alec, maybe we talk later, ok? Have class – I said.
- Ok, see you, Bella – he hugged me.
- Bye, Bella!
- Bye, Alec – I said. I passed all the day well, I went home, did what I and to do. And went back from is school in the next day. I was searching like a freak Edward and I didn’t find him anywhere. Was when I eared his voice. I saw a part of him in the class of geography and went to talk to him. I went to give his present of Valentine’s Day, a paste with my photo making a heart with the hands and ‘’Eternal Love’’ wrote in front the paste. When I saw Victoria.
- Edward… This is so beautiful! – was when I saw the ring what he gave me in the Valentine’s Day and that I forgot in the class… He was giving for Victoria.
- Do you like it? Is special, for the only person I love – he said. The tears of pain betrayal began to fall and I let the present fall on the floor. Edward looked at me and chased me.
- Bella! Bella, stop, please! – he said.
- You liar! Stupid, how can I believe in you? Go search your Victoria! Go, Edward! – I said crying.
- Shut up, Bella! Why you don’t trust me, what’s your problem?!
- How can I trust you, you must be asking me! What? Victoria is really better than me? Say, Edward, I want to listen of your mouth!
- Really? You want, ok, Bella. So, pay attention: Victoria is better than you, a million times. You are infantile, selfish, jerk, impulsive and you don’t know anything of the life. You are just another girl, for me you’re nothing. Of course Victoria is better than you, happy in ear that? And you know what? I’m tired of you, of your ridiculous attacks of jealous! I’M TIRED OF YOU, ISABELLA SWAN. – He said.
- Get out of here, Edward! Get out of here; I don’t want to see you face never anymore! STAY AWAY FROM ME! – I cried and went away running. Listen this words of his mouth, know that I was right and he never loved me was the worse thing. My heart was like if some one had pushed him from my chest. And after this I decided that live every day seeing his face, remembering the moment when he said what he think of me, will be terrible. And that I can’t feel that pain again. Not anymore.’’ I looked at Jake; he was with tears in the eyes. I cleaned.
- Bella… What sad…
- Yes, Jake, this is sad. This was the worst moment in my life ever. Edward was the reason what I came to live in New York, Jake. I was running away for him and that pain.
- Bella…
- Jake, you know my history. Why I came here, why I broke up with Edward and why I can’t see him again.
- Bells… Ask that maybe will be stupid of my part, but… Same after all of this… - He didn’t finish.
- What, Jacob? – I asked looking at the ocean.
- Bella, you still feeling something with him?
- Jake… - I said.
- Edward is just the only thing what I can’t think about, the person what I most hate in the world. What I feel with him is this. Hate. Nothing more, not now and never. Edward and I must not be together. I think… This was our destiny…
- Ok… I guess is better going home… - he was saying when Edward appeared behind us.
- Just now you think about it? - Edward said.
- Edward! What are you doing here? - I screamed.
- I came here now, we were searching you for all the city, Bella, what’s the problem with you?
- Shut up, dude – Jake said.
- Wow, the angry boyfriend will do something with me? Come, I’m waiting. – Edward said.
- Stop! – I said being in the middle of the two.
- Ok, Bella, let’s go home. – Edward said and got me for his arms.
- Don’t touch me! – I screamed.
- Shut up – He said. Jake started to shake.
This really will not work…

Edward’s POV

Bella’s boyfriend was shaking and I was with Bella in my arms again. No that this cares, of course, is just a detail.
- Jake, please… - Bella said.
- Stay away from her!
- Go to the hell – I said. I went for the car and Jacob didn’t move. Ha. I won.
- Edward, don’t touch me!
- Bella, shut up, ok?
- Edward, let me go! – She screamed. She was so cute angry.
- Bella, please, just shut up or a will get something to put on your mouth.
- - You will not… - she said and I got an apple what was in the car and put on her mouth.
- Told you. – I said. We went back from the house and Emmet and Jasper were already there.
- Bella! – Carlisle said.
- Why she’s with an apple on her mouth? – The blonde girl said.
- Shut up, Rosalie – Bella said and went for her room. Wow.
- Hey, Ed! What’s up, men?
- Edward, you and Bella are not very good, ha?
- Shut up, Emmet.
- Edward, will you go for Bella’s marry?
- Bella will get married?!
- Yes, Edward, with Jacob, I though you already knew that. – Rosalie said. No… No way…
- No, I didn’t.
- Dude, I’m so sorry… - Emmet said.
- Not more than me…
I went for Bella’s room and closed the door.
- What are you doing here?! – She screamed.
- Hush, Bella! I wan to know exactly why you are like that with me.
- How you already don’t know. – Se said. Oh… She’s talking about…
- I will make the things easier for you. – She pushed me out of the room.
- Everything started when I knew you…
Then she closed the door in my face.


Wow, the chapter 4 was big! Uff… Tired xD, if you, guys want to know what will happen in the chapter 5 I want 6 comments! Vampire kisses and bites!

2 comments:

  1. OMG,OMG,OMG,OMG!!!!
    the beach is awesome!
    the propose was really beautiful and romantic!
    the story of bella and edward is really sad.. but i think that bella understood wrong... i think edward was saying 2 vickie that the ring was for her[bella]!but then he did an stupid thing, calling her of all those names....
    so, what edward was thinking?? that he can just came and take bella of her groom? he's nothing 2 her!he's her pain!
    really crazy 2 next chapter
    see u soon
    yastata

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  2. I cried all the time while I was reading! But is PERFECT!!! U R THE BEST, SIS! <3<3<3

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